ext_267942 ([identity profile] servetolive.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] impishtubist 2010-12-31 08:50 pm (UTC)

.... Good lord, what a magnificent story to read on New Year's Eve!

I can't applaud you're exquisite writing style enough. It would take me weeks of effort to write a story that sounds even remotely as profound and thought-provoking as yours did, and it seems like you just rolled over in bed, took pen in hand and started writing. That is talent. XD

I don't know how you did it, but you seemed to write about the end of human civilization without making it depressing or dark and cloudy. In fact, I found this whole piece very uplifting.

You did great with Data's voice, although I particularly enjoyed Lore and his unusually profound words. I also thought it was sweet of him to join his brother for the event.

Happy New Year to you too. n___n

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