Oh, this is just too incredibly beautiful for words. You've gotten inside their heads so well - the writing is somehow detached, accepting of the circumstances; underneath it, though, is raw grief and the knowledge of lives forever changed.
Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. What a wonderful story to wake up to. Thank you for writing it!
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Date: 2012-01-13 03:31 pm (UTC)Gorgeous, gorgeous, gorgeous. What a wonderful story to wake up to. Thank you for writing it!