the way that you took your time to show several situations of oblivion and the good juicy detail of the three working together made me grow impatient with them. Seemed very real.
I like that some things happened off camera and that Sherlock was kinda normal once he got a clue.
It was a really, really fun read where I was totally in their world.
I would not be oblivious but gosh, I would love a kiss like that.
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Date: 2011-11-22 04:04 am (UTC)I like that some things happened off camera and that Sherlock was kinda normal once he got a clue.
It was a really, really fun read where I was totally in their world.
I would not be oblivious but gosh, I would love a kiss like that.